Marilyn Monro 3rd try is a charm

I was starting get mad at this assignment, because I couldn't get a likness!  I think I got it now any C&C are welcome!

New Marilyn Manson

Please give some feed back, Should it be colored? Is there any Likeness? Etc. Thank You

Marilyn Manson

This drawing was drawn for May competition on the NCN (National Caricaturist Network) Forum. I like the challenge of capturing his skin tones, but not what he stands for in his image, and believes